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“Papa, mama....I
got that job.” Ravi shouted loudly. His mother thanked God and father hugged
him tightly. “You don’t have to worry
now, soon we will move to a new house far from this village, I will buy you a
gold chain mama and I will admit papa in a private hospital.” He continued
breathless.
His father
was an asthma patient. Due to lack of money he couldn’t get treatment done.
They went to sleep that night and it was raining outside.
The next day landslide occurred and over 700 families washed
away along with their hopes, desires and wishes.
“But wishes
only are granted in fairy tale.”
Here’s my
first attempt for 100 words on Saturday from write tribe.
Thanks for
stopping by. I read each and every comment so leave a comment to improve
me......
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Monday, 4 August 2014
SKETCHY DREAMS.....
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Sad one. Really landslide took away so much...wiping out dreams, hopes & desires...
ReplyDeleteNicely expressed, Arpita!
There is a say Anita "There are two tragedies in life, One is to loose your heart's desire and the other is to gain it."
DeleteHere the first tragedy happens...
nicely written appy... really sometimes these disasters took everything from other...keep writing
ReplyDeleteHmm...Sagar The world is a tragedy for those who can feel it....
DeleteUff, sad and touching....
ReplyDeletereally touched, no one can underestimate the mother nature
thanks for your visit on http://bhavikkshah.blogspot.in/
Have a fantastic day ahead Maam
There is a say Bhavikk "The truth is you don't know what is going to happen tomorrow. Life is a crazy ride, and nothing is guaranteed."
DeleteYou are welcome.....
ohh so sad... no one has a hold against mother nature
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Yaa you are absolutely right Tina......life has many surprises for you....
DeleteThat's so sad. We can never know what's destiny has in store of us..the biggest tragedy are dreams unfulfilled.
ReplyDeletehttp://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/08/05/100-words-on-saturday-my-grand-mother-said/
Life is what happens to you while you are busy making other plans....
Deletethanks for visiting my blog..
Monsoons are nostalgic , monsoons are a blessings, but only when you are secure and hopeful. True for all those survivors whom the tragedy struck this must have been an unbelievable disaster. A very different take on the prompt. Good one.
ReplyDeleteThanks jayanthi :)
Deleteyou are right about monsoons, sometimes it doesn't show its mercy to the people.
That twist in the end was unexpected and good, but some more build up in the beginning would have made this story more interesting. However, considering that this is a 100-word story, it's nice :)
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
Thank you Destination Infinity for being honest with me.....:)
ReplyDeleteNext time I'll try to give stress on plot.....